Your “BURNING” is…er…I want to be nice….I can’t…horrible!
It’s very heavy-handed, obvious and distracting.
Now for the work: On one, no caption at all. On another, not ID but a referencer to the Black Scorpions (what happened to the International United and The Aztecs?) which begets the question of who the other team is, but does not then negate the requirement to ID the players.
See what I mean. Captions are an issue.
Every shot of a player must be accompanied by an ID. Not my rules. Those are the rules of photojournalism.
The photography? Not bad. Good captures. Bad light (evening) made it hard. Could you do a 180 and shoot from the other side so you’re not shooting into the bright sky?
Your “BURNING” is…er…I want to be nice….I can’t…horrible!
It’s very heavy-handed, obvious and distracting.
Now for the work: On one, no caption at all. On another, not ID but a referencer to the Black Scorpions (what happened to the International United and The Aztecs?) which begets the question of who the other team is, but does not then negate the requirement to ID the players.
See what I mean. Captions are an issue.
Every shot of a player must be accompanied by an ID. Not my rules. Those are the rules of photojournalism.
The photography? Not bad. Good captures. Bad light (evening) made it hard. Could you do a 180 and shoot from the other side so you’re not shooting into the bright sky?