Please do not mix B/W and color. It is subtle but it implies different “authorship.” Also, do not crop photos -such as the panorama- into none original formats.
Now for the work: You need your longest lens and it needs to be at f:2.8, i.e., you need shallow focus. Backgrounds are distracting.
You have captions on some but not on all. You need them on all.
Your timing is good on some but on others you missed the moment: the “moment is the p[layer, the ball and the eyes…
So, don’t mix “voices”(B/W v. Color), get closer, work on your timing, remember about depth-of-field/aperture and don’t crop into none standard shapes.
This was a tough assignment for sure. Thanks for the feedback.
Please do not mix B/W and color. It is subtle but it implies different “authorship.” Also, do not crop photos -such as the panorama- into none original formats.
Now for the work: You need your longest lens and it needs to be at f:2.8, i.e., you need shallow focus. Backgrounds are distracting.
You have captions on some but not on all. You need them on all.
Your timing is good on some but on others you missed the moment: the “moment is the p[layer, the ball and the eyes…
So, don’t mix “voices”(B/W v. Color), get closer, work on your timing, remember about depth-of-field/aperture and don’t crop into none standard shapes.
This was a tough assignment for sure. Thanks for the feedback.