I think your files are too large. Please check them.
Good work on the assignment, BUT, there is a lost feeling to these. Too much stuff that isn’t about anything. Things things things. You have a good eye but I think you mught have a shooter’s gift: the ability to get people to cooperate with you in making pictures of them. Shoot more people.
When you shoot color shoot color. When you shoot B/W shoot B/W. But don’t pick and choose, it looks random and indecisive.
I think your files are too large. Please check them.
Good work on the assignment, BUT, there is a lost feeling to these. Too much stuff that isn’t about anything. Things things things. You have a good eye but I think you mught have a shooter’s gift: the ability to get people to cooperate with you in making pictures of them. Shoot more people.
When you shoot color shoot color. When you shoot B/W shoot B/W. But don’t pick and choose, it looks random and indecisive.