Journalism student at New Mexico State University. Samuel is currently employed with NMSU University Communications and Marketing Services as a Student News Writer.
6 were required. Where are the other 3? Please explain.That is hurting your grade. It’s half done.
Your shooting is good. Was this shot in the Bowie Bowl? It’s a dungeon! If so, good stuff.
Is “Bowie High School running back, Arturo Madrid, intercepts a touchdown pass,” really playing on defense or is he “RECEIVING,” the pass?
WHO recovered the fumble?
Don’t say, “…attempts to run for a touchdown.” On every play players are a”attempting” to get a touchdown. How about just “…runs the ball for a three inch gain,” or something like that?
6 were required. Where are the other 3? Please explain.That is hurting your grade. It’s half done.
Your shooting is good. Was this shot in the Bowie Bowl? It’s a dungeon! If so, good stuff.
Is “Bowie High School running back, Arturo Madrid, intercepts a touchdown pass,” really playing on defense or is he “RECEIVING,” the pass?
WHO recovered the fumble?
Don’t say, “…attempts to run for a touchdown.” On every play players are a”attempting” to get a touchdown. How about just “…runs the ball for a three inch gain,” or something like that?