These are OK. Is the white background “working?” What do YOU think? We’ve discussed the shadows rimming the people. Got to get rid of that. Leave nothing for anyone to criticize technically and they accept anything.
I’d like more in the captions. Expand. Who are they? Their dreams and ambitions? How’d they get to be what they are? 5Ws and the H solves a lot of that but your desire to “tell” about them is what we need.;
These are OK. Is the white background “working?” What do YOU think? We’ve discussed the shadows rimming the people. Got to get rid of that. Leave nothing for anyone to criticize technically and they accept anything.
I’d like more in the captions. Expand. Who are they? Their dreams and ambitions? How’d they get to be what they are? 5Ws and the H solves a lot of that but your desire to “tell” about them is what we need.;