Almost Famous/ Editorial Portrait

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1. Nice.
   Well done on every level.
   All are Big Fish. All are portrayed in a “telling” environmental way. All are technically well done including sharpness. The light is good. I’m not sure I love that two of them are doing things. I think it let’s us get “into them” a little less when we’re watching people do things. Your job is do a PORTRAIT, let us KNOW these people. The policeman is moodier because he’s a mystery, looking out of the frame…not what we’d generally think when we think of a policeman.
   Your captioning is good. I’d like just a little more. Tell us about them. How’d they get to where they are? What’s their dreams? Expand what we know about them…use the words to do what the photos can’t do and use the photos to tell what the words can’t do.
   OK?
   Atta girl!

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