PANTHER PRIDE BAND
As a proud sister of one of the trumpet players for the Gadsden High School band, I have had the constant task of picking him up from practice or even to take his instrument whenever he would forget it. Before I had no idea what the world of band was like. Through my brother’s experience, I’ve realized how much of a family they are. Together they perform in order to achieve something magical.
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Coherent story.
I think these do tell most of a story but not all. You needed more closeups. What I mean is, use the elements of the “language of photography”… composition, distance to the subject, angles, leading lines, light. Also, get some stuff that isn’t on the field, like your brother alone, somewhere, practicing with his instrument.
You do have some “drama.”