A Day with Milton
Gods office for the facts
Coming to NMSU as a journalist major I made a true friend who has the same passion to impact success. I spend all my days with my best friend Milton, looking for the facts and learning from the past, oh yeah Milton is a building who gives me everything and never takes anything from me.
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I do not see deep immersion (multiple shoots on different times) as required. This could have been done in one day. Immersion means you shoot, you get to Photoshop, you analyze what you have AND DO NOT HAVE,” and you go back and start filling in what you don’t have.
When you have a bunch of students “working,” SHOW THEM WORKING. You can’t stand back and show the backs of people and expect the viewers of your images to care. You can’t show what anyone can see, you have to dig in and make it PHOTOGRAPHIC, using composition, distance to the subject, angles of view, etc. t make it come alive.
You needed to spend more time on this.